This assignment will require you to compose a critique essay based on one of the assigned reading selections.

I had to write a formal critical analysis on the book mind step only on chapter 1 of the book and my only source I can use as well FYI (https://icrrd.com/media/01-11-2020-205951Mindset%20by%20Carol%20S.%20Dweck.pdf) <- the book
This was the type of essay i had to write
Essay #1: Critical Analysis Essay
This assignment will require you to compose a critique essay based on one of the
assigned reading selections. The writing prompt will require you to focus your
critique on specific components of the reading selection. You will be required to
integrate source material into your paragraphs as supporting evidence from only
the piece you are critiquing.
This is a formal essay.
Here’s the comment on my rough draft so these are the things you need to fix and add a bit more from what I wrote already if possibly
“The grade for this assignment is a holistic grade for completing the assignment according to the parameters listed in the writing prompt. For details regarding how you can further develop the content of this draft, access the “Essay 1 Paragraph Development” file posted with the Week 4 materials, and pay close attention in class this coming Monday.
The format of this draft does not adhere to the format of the Sample Essay.
I do not see the name of the course or the instructor’s name, and the date should be in the European format.
Your title is not an original title; it is the name of the assignment.
There are line spacing gaps throughout this draft causing it to fall far short of three and a half pages.
The title of the first chapter is “The Mindsets”. You mention the chapter in the introductory paragraph but then provide an incorrect title, thus clouding the issue of which chapter your essay addresses making your thesis statement unclear.
Every supporting paragraph should contain at at least two citations from the chapter.
The concluding paragraph should contain one, and only one, final citation from the chapter to drive home the thesis statement of your essay.”